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My Girl Takes Care Of Me In Public

I took her to the planetarium and she took me to the moon

Veronica Devereux Erotica in Veronica’s Smut (Erotica) · 2026-03-27 10:01 · 336 claps · 6.2 min read paywalled
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My Girl Takes Care Of Me In Public

I took her to the planetarium and she took me to the moon

This is a work of fiction. All characters depicted are over the age of 18, provided consent, and are not related to each other.

I had a date with my girlfriend and couldn’t wait. That girl is fine, and I can’t help myself when I’m around her.

“Damn girl,” I said when she opened the door. “Looking good!”

Jen was wearing a very short skirt and blouse that barely covered her nice figure. Jen’s got the best titties I’ve ever seen. She’s got a round ass and likes to have me smack it a little when we fuck. Her face blushed and it looked like her titties poked out a little as I complimented her.

“You ready?” I asked.

I was expecting her to invite me in while she got dressed or something like usual. But she grabbed her purse and closed the front door behind her. So, I took her hand and led her out to my car. Her hands are usually cold as ice, but tonight they were warm and sweating. After I closed the car door behind her I went around to my side.

“I thought we’d go to the planetarium,” I said. Have you ever been?”

Looking at her, Jen was acting kind of weird. She bit her lips and nodded. “Once when I was little, but I don’t remember it.”

“Is everything okay?” I asked, brushing her hair back with my hand. My skin is so dark that it contrasts with her pale skin and catches me by surprise every time. “We don’t have to go if you don’t want. Or we can go somewhere else.”

“No. No, it’s okay,” she said. “I’m just having cramps tonight.”

Shit. There goes getting laid, I thought.

“That’s okay. We can just go look at the stars.”

I put the car into gear with my cock so hard it hurt. I tried to relax so I wouldn’t have a hard on when we got there. But after I parked, I hurried around to open her door. I’ve always loved the planetarium and hope to get into the astronomy program in the fall when I get to State. I bought us the best tickets they had and we went inside. There were some seats away from everybody and we chose those.

After the lights went down, a woman came out and started talking about the stars and planets and galaxies. And while she was saying all that, I started with my hand on Jen’s thigh, letting my finger stroke up and down her smooth skin. I edged my finger further up her leg until it reached her hem line, and then I pried it up to go inside.

Jen closed her legs, and said inn a playful voice, “Keep your hands to yourself.”

She arched her eyebrows like she was mad, but smiled so I knew she wasn’t.

I had thought about finger banging her when I came up with the idea of bringing her here. But I guessed I really wasn’t going to get any pussy tonight. So I folded my hands and put them in my lap.

But I’ve never been a good listener, and put my hand on top of her knee. Making like it wasn’t on purpose, I inched back up her thigh and enjoyed the cool of her upper leg.

“Not tonight,” she whispered. “Cramps!”

I took my hand off her again and sighed. She probably isn’t even on her period. It’s not like we haven’t done it. And she’s so tight. I love having those pale legs around me and watching my big ebony cock parting her pink folds. Then when I cum…She makes me feel so damn good.

Damn period, I thought. Every time I think I’m gonna get some, she stops me.

I put my arm around her shoulder and held her for a little while. I wanted to let her know everything was alright. And I didn’t plan on doing anything, but my hands had a mind of their own.

My fingers went under the collar of her blouse and then under her bra strap. I pushed it off her shoulder and then went down the front of her shirt. Her skin was cold from being in the air conditioner, I guess, and her skin was soft like a baby’s. I went down under her bra as far as I could and rubbed the top of her tit. She slunk down in her seat, making it hard for for me to go lower.

My cock had gotten hard at an uncomfortable angle in my slacks and was pinned down by my underwear. With my free hand, I reached over and picked up her hand. She let me move it over and place it right on top of my dick. Like an instinct, her fingers curled around it through my pants. Her hands are so little that they can’t hold the whole thing. But that’s okay. It felt good just having them there.

I reached down and unzipped my fly. Then I fished out my cock and held it straight up for her to suck on. She couldn’t see it in the dark, but my dick was pulsing and already had leaked out some pre-cum for her. A string of cool jizz draped from inside my pants and down onto my pelvis.

With my arm around her shoulder, I pulled Jen down towards my shaft. She resisted going further, but I kept tugging at her to let her know what I wanted.

“Come on, baby,” I whispered. “Don’t leave me like this.”

She relaxed all at once like she had decided to give in and let me pull her down the rest of the way. With her head in my lap, the smell of her lavender hair conditioner filled my nose. She lifted my cock to her lips and than started sucking on the head. I closed my eyes and leaned back in my seat. While the science lady talked about the cosmos and shit, I savored the feeling of my girl sucking down on my dick.

My cock is big, and she’s never been able to get much of me in her mouth. But what she lacks in depth, she makes up for with technique. Her tongue is never still and she licks the sides and all around my head like she’s eating candy.

She spit into her hand and started jacking me off into her mouth. She has given me some good blow jobs before, but here in the auditorium with a bunch of other people around, Jennifer gave me the best dick sucking of my life. She worked my entire shaft and her tongue swirled all around my head in ways she’d never done before.

Her tongue didn’t hold to one place either. She flicked the front with the tip of her tongue and swabbed out the slit like she was cleaning it. Before I knew it, I was pressing myself into her face. An orgasm started to build in my balls and I knew I was gonna maybe blow the back of her head off when I came.

I put my hand on the back of her head as she bobbed up and down on my shaft. I was breathing hard and my heart was racing. I pressed down and held her there until she gagged a little from my tip touching the back of her throat.

Somebody a couple rows away dropped their soda and it tumbled down the stadium seating. I opened my eyes in time to see a shooting star flit across the ceiling screen. The woman giving the presentation kept talking, but I wasn’t listening. Something about asteroids.

And finally I fired off a comet into Jen’s mouth unlike anything I’d ever given her before. I tried to stay quiet, but I’m afraid I groaned and moaned as Jen sucked the jizz out of my pole.

She kept bobbing up and down and I kept pumping my seed into her. It started leaking out the sides and draining to the base of my cock. But I didn’t care. I wanted her to keep going until I was empty. She coughed once and streams of my cum dribbled everywhere.

She cleaned me the best she could with her mouth and licked her lips. Jen looked up at me and smiled with cum on the corners of her mouth. I smiled too and brushed her hair back a little. She swallowed one more time and breathed a quiet gasp. I handed her a napkin and gave her a minute to clean herself up.

“We’d better get out of here,” I suggested, stuffing my still-hard cock back in my pants. She grabbed her purse and we made our way towards a side door. I held Jen’s hand all the way to the car and we hurried off to get some ice cream.

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