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Part Of The Discard From "Wind & Wine"

Words & Themes

Dave Gottlieb · 2026-05-02 18:24 · 110 claps · 0.9 min read paywalled
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REPETITION

Part Of The Discard From "Wind & Wine"

Words & Themes

Wind & Wine Discard

Snake smack water Bitter gall, not a fall North wind snake your way Fertile Venus, life issue Blood is wine Dracula begs to differ

Can I use chthonic? I used it in Origins. Can I use psychopomp? I used it elsewhere How about Quicksilver? I used it in Wharton’s Jelly.

I mention Sita again. Nimue & Persephone. And elsewhere I stated and complained that I keep coming back to the same themes. I try to recombine it in a way that works.

Maybe soon I’ll finish Silver Sita- If that stays the name. At the top of this were some of what was discarded in Wind & Wine. More of the discarded lines will be in Silver Sita verses III, IV and V, but in a more reworked form.

It should be noted that Wine & Wind was a continuing of a sort of Lilit and Jack OF The Lantern. Preceding stragglers of ideas meet with new friends along the way and are rushed forward through strainer. Fragments are left and the damned process can perpetuate! Unfortunately, I am the strainer. What I pass & what I stop and how I knead what I need is rife with deficiency.

Coming at some point, perhaps is a response to a challenge and tag by Sunita Chakraborty We shall see if I can muster up a response.


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