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A Roar Of

Some 5/7/5s, others not

Dave Gottlieb · 2025-12-18 19:00 · 498 claps · 0.9 min read paywalled
#communication #deity #death #begining #pain
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COMMUNICATION

A Roar Of

Some 5/7/5s, others not

Sunset. I am yet to get subrise or prior.

Sunset. I am yet to get subrise or prior.

The individual verses might mean something. The connection between them is more tenuous.

The connection might be more of a feel I have. That feel, however, might just be a justification for shoehorning!

I have lots of lines and verses that may have more of a poetic basis than a factual one. If not here, then, you should see my drafts

Please note that the “of” in the first verse is meant to be read and sounded as a short a.

I

A roar of morning

Eos, Ushas, light dawning

A roar of first light

II

Have elephant scribe

Tengo ganas Ganishar

Am ready to write

III

Sweet voiced bird

Not crazy about my words

My voice ill melodious

IV

Belated happy Day of the Dead, Señora

Commune with any shade you desire

No need of an Endor Witch

V

The snake is a nag Imploring, to what result? Eat of the apple

VI

An example made of Saamp Caleb dogs my step

Pain unbearable, need Bayers


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