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Unexpected cold

A haiku

Mark Stuart Farrar in 17 Onji — Haiku, Senryu, and Zappai · 2025-12-06 17:54 · 57 claps · 0.5 min read paywalled
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Unexpected cold

A haiku

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christmas eve — the unexpected cold of a gaslight

The poem pauses at a small, surprising contrast, where the warmth of Christmas Eve meets the cool, steady glow of an old gaslight. Its unexpected chill feels almost like a reminder that even in familiar rituals, something quiet and unanticipated can rise to the surface. It’s a moment held between nostalgia and night air, gently sharpening the stillness around it.

First published on NaHaiWriMo.

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